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BLUE is changes directly from my beta, shri_tal

RED is others feedback and things I found on my own

YELLOW is things I changed after reviewing my beta's comments, but are not direct suggestions

Wednesday, January 19, 2011

Moments Drudgery Bit

I acknowledge that Elim Garak, Julian Bashir, Cardassia, etc. are the property of either Paramount or CBS, not entirely sure which due to the changes in 2006. The story is however mine, and done solely for entertainment purposes.

Okay this was developed for a class of mine. Of course for the class it was a bit different, the characters were my own interpretation of Garak, Julian, and Ziyal if they were people living today on Earth. But, I really wanted to do the version with the lovable Star Trek character from Deep Space Nine.

Open Source Writing Note- I'm not posting the drafts of the story this is based on because they aren't technically Deep Space Nine. I also don't want to publish work from my school/career world on this blog, as it is not a very professional blog. Keeping private life and work life separate.

Summary- Garak and Bashir go to a Natatorium in the holosuite together. They meet Ziyal there.

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